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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,0 O" q& _: l, H) i1 f9 r8 }
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
2 ^( q7 v) G9 Y0 G零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
+ ?1 m" n, ~6 D0 [; L) \ i" v! X现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.& m% k' E' ]/ k
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.. q9 T: f+ m( I1 C+ x! p3 C' n
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.( {( L- L/ `, x3 t
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
0 f2 m( n& K3 y8 Q猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
+ \; I5 ]. S. I* F就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.1 Y n1 z8 [. c
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及+ s* x6 x' @; O: P! S8 d0 w: t
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。( y4 |; F+ Y6 f/ I- M
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
) R( o9 I) X+ S6 W, Q1 q昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
' ?! W$ m I8 o+ V( Q想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
$ g7 R4 e, F2 C4 e0 P/ |* {3 ?最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
0 W w* F: z8 s1 `# L6 W寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?& P' D( c4 K, E
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
4 a" ] {/ u( C* y* {迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
+ f; I- E) }' t* C+ ^最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.+ ^6 t4 a/ r+ _! D) q# _
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?+ h2 D. h2 S, j0 ?$ j6 {6 z; D1 n4 S
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….% h; ], t b) Q# R4 q
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously, x9 ^3 c% n, d* @
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
: n1 r3 U0 i4 M5 B. ]/ o: `多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
3 a7 p6 H+ x( z1 B! n; h# ~为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
$ f% o1 E1 g9 _+ F多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!1 j! T; V2 g4 w* }% P
永难平息的泪
4 @# r* ^2 f0 p7 y每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
5 _) ?. k# V8 M, c. V~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.5 P' ]/ t% e5 h6 J; y
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.* l) m0 t. a, t
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
, F( @8 p0 T- d0 l. l5 K( M你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
- G& ^6 g+ j& T5 [6 T一抹微笑;
" P: N9 `- [% Y0 V一个手势;
2 w. V$ `) O d9 e0 ?+ Z. Q: y0 `一片话语,
# o: J5 l3 s+ V1 o, W- }/ C8 y愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
4 n( B- G# \7 E6 z; L明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner; j5 R% v" L9 z9 W- ?6 H
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.0 n! f3 h& ^5 q# A
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
! V3 m& n! [+ v. y* u$ `# h也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..' U2 u1 [/ a5 A# x9 P/ m- [
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
" e6 t( e6 P! o9 p# @6 k0 N5 Z4 I我并不以为然。
2 H% b& m1 o- m1 a6 G$ r: m可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
2 v! W5 a- n3 {+ `5 k* K慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion ./ K2 e- l3 B4 n5 p
被一种情绪所左右,
0 e. {; S1 t' I, E6 C. X' E7 R* \2 Z$ {总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
& _& |, u) R% B7 C6 y2 w' c" i即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
9 B: W' a; v1 b: h' t- G* X也不问我是否喜欢你,
3 m+ T% E0 }5 M! i/ M对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.( p9 |4 Q4 ^2 k3 B9 j
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you/ \% X; m. J$ W
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you9 ^* F/ O! {+ K9 G4 G
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil6 `2 `; m' }! ~( R5 c. ?# p1 v/ r4 Q8 I
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
2 B O* L2 t9 L) `4 T你的身影已化成一种氛围,2 w1 s& x4 O) Q2 L2 i
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.7 C8 j4 r" G& Y" ^% u
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
6 w Z: U y& C1 E. {; d; A' y) X随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
6 x7 y# U8 J \- _: R$ Y: `哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
/ O, E. c0 a, E" s( r一种声音,and your voice
$ ~/ y# E9 H0 R也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.9 G; O7 u* q: q# c; i! G1 D
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
+ Y$ C H( X0 K4 u3 k与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
( \0 P) N2 b" r f象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
. X9 c3 z1 T. U1 D5 M9 ?倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.: _! a& T0 r/ H2 \1 i# C
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。2 Z( N$ r, m+ W" t: s
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
* [, k% c/ D* ?' c# Y# b/ T6 a/ g有一个能够让思念的人,5 G1 g$ p" D# t7 j* @ o: a
其实也是一种幸福。
- C! ~2 B: B+ d; D( q* g尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. 4 Z: A% x. V+ Q" u% f3 e/ g+ Z
柔柔的海风,; H0 f- Z7 a2 R; i, D D @7 d
甜甜的夏天。 _, [( Y; Z5 S8 W Y
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
2 k/ w* }; y; w( X) T' q# l" ]/ p只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
; ~# k4 C% s9 p仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.3 T; @* k! j5 a0 @) G7 S+ Y
想和你有共同的情结,
9 `- I6 R E" L P2 N1 `4 j Y: j" U共同的心愿。* ^$ A% M9 u$ S2 ]& x, z# |# U
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
! b" Z7 W6 K$ C3 V# l一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together+ e0 v& `$ b3 j" M
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film - ]$ `$ H$ x3 r
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly., ^8 m n0 c9 W1 E: T) z$ y* L8 S' i
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
* j7 s# C; w5 a5 O我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
( t2 D, t& T2 m* Y6 n浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
: X8 A" N* u! q* K! Y$ c3 Z, k3 ]或是轻轻的一吻,
; o5 {" Y7 c$ I再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
' Q6 m) c X4 B, H( p& R. b就足够了. That is enough.. f+ ]0 o! I' L/ L* R- T
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 0 [6 Q1 l" G0 q% Y
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
1 T( u. u4 r. G! m萌出了芽,
. t: i `3 X# c' A" s+ l2 y一如对你的思念,the same as my missing, e1 ^3 R% U# `- i8 x, L& d
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
; Y/ [7 d1 u p) }8 H如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
+ x1 X. U* ]: z能够牵著你的手,
9 a8 ] _1 x' W: m& ^; y那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
3 R4 Y8 r. P. x( F R让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
5 f7 Q3 g" \) s# B慢慢地细读,
" T6 N* r( ]2 ]8 s' b# F$ J" a我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
: q0 E7 B* S9 q7 P+ K- r4 _: e6 Z在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
% ?4 N# `/ \. n5 i# E$ S我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
. i4 J- X; r, m5 M6 @就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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