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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
( K2 i7 Z- Y- _8 CI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  1 h5 Z% C, `. b$ P: ?4 M& t
Dreamers2 W. P# ~6 e6 P5 O8 }9 t; }
Savages
7 V# J5 j, ?/ L: KPoets) d; G3 \* q6 w6 A; Q% J' U
Builders of canoes,
" d0 U( k; v5 B; cBlack smiths
$ F) i, |) J' H! |* X8 y& gMurderers,
0 ?' ^! ?/ U; g- L' zRisk takers,& x  {4 V6 x4 ]1 {
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder - _& Z3 l, ]$ ?. A7 Q
As I think of what could be. # p- N/ Z( A6 [" C9 q5 J$ {1 }
The world is so big to me
* W/ B& U0 e. Q0 ?; K5 S% z3 zI wonder what it means to be' D( j6 `6 o. H; a  T' P
I looked up at the star and smiled ! Z6 y6 ]" W! h+ j) X9 s% G& u4 H1 v
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. & {- [5 i: |4 F3 n: c/ o

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
+ z7 r; l& K+ L$ H5 @7 s( c6 T评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
3 m/ p; s7 w, T6 k# Y. m2 \$ J3 P顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,  u) C- A/ b/ \* ~- z8 @
A poor old Guy;1 H! ?: p# Y4 [# e; B
Legs in a bonfire,
! [( A9 s& e: l* ~( c- l1 P9 VHead in the sky
3 Z% t! P& E9 C- W! TLonely, with the feel of betray
5 Z7 I. X# n7 zHeart empty and hollow4 K/ m+ a/ H0 I* \. f& m6 O( k
Alone I stand. q2 Y  }: {+ f2 t7 W: n8 _
I am useless to all
5 f& z  U$ f' H7 DBut I wish I were a dove
9 K) T: C; c0 Q9 Y) N4 j( lGiving myself to the world, to the fire; j  M9 \- p) B5 U
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
7 y6 i3 O8 `2 O* w4 ?- c, aI sent prayers to my god
* V9 {; h' D  b4 MThough he does not answer9 A3 Q4 v' N$ L- ]3 _4 Z
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。* M4 B% x8 V5 ^! \
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