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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 4 h6 `% ~* `* g
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  % {8 p* s+ w# K, |0 Y
Dreamers
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Poets) r( ^0 e2 I. e4 Z: E+ A( n
Builders of canoes,
7 m' k( I' @. H/ CBlack smiths
* D7 h- s8 R# S* M" GMurderers,
3 L: z7 ^: {& n& m) ]8 _Risk takers,  a' b$ @% f, H& r
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder ! |/ y7 g, R1 W7 }7 J2 I
As I think of what could be. : i! s- [  Z- F2 m7 |& v6 _, ?
The world is so big to me 2 u" Y, y4 J+ G3 v5 u; n
I wonder what it means to be- z- N  [- X* c9 }) L, L0 S) C
I looked up at the star and smiled # J: \' j: Q' J
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
2 Q8 [: c5 L! [2 N7 D评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。. A  l. M1 v" ]5 j5 |. O% {7 \
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,- \6 X. t' ~5 _# y( K# `
A poor old Guy;8 [" B' K5 P9 Q1 Z' U) A
Legs in a bonfire,- _" l1 Q( l' K! C3 m
Head in the sky
4 ?$ B  `8 N* Q! }, X$ ~Lonely, with the feel of betray
# T2 @/ r3 T$ x- HHeart empty and hollow6 ]  Y; ^* [2 P; ^7 L1 U
Alone I stand
$ N5 |7 u9 A3 |# @/ b6 e, v& HI am useless to all 6 e, ?" H+ j$ c! ]& V8 D& x
But I wish I were a dove & @/ h0 A* g- p! l% v
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
) m3 f8 M1 B7 X! P' B4 }) j- O" zI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
: j2 K8 g4 ?3 r' i1 iI sent prayers to my god9 x! C5 O* P3 |/ I: Z! T# w; F
Though he does not answer
, I! H9 P  }  E6 P5 `! O" J/ L, [, WHe bless me with the gift of hope 1 f6 N1 ^: \- l% {
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。: l, \% K/ o; s) t
加油加油,经常写写!
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