作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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4 |* S5 z  d  n" a# C; b9 r) k0 |! t# T　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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5 m4 J. w2 ]0 I, pexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

- Q) b7 [+ W) W+ @" T4 E$ B was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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( Q- Q0 U' V9 j6 |trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

1 z5 G& m3 `  F) Dthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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- j7 a* I2 R. l7 q# F  f+ B. p on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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; U* v' t3 u/ U/ l% A( w3 Tdeaest daughter.


After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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" u  ]. x# [, c, h[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！