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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,8 S& o7 `1 _3 H/ }! E. k
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
+ X1 c) c! A7 @零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 3 S* n' O5 K- a( W2 q
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
9 J$ ^7 o3 H. f- T+ J梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
^" J' n. V2 R4 j) A9 z {' H* V眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.4 Y, m7 R$ o/ F2 N) ?
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night./ R$ m2 K. \- c9 A6 T. V. s
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
8 u2 ^; ^0 \( Y( t就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
~4 Q- }# Q5 i" H我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
2 |1 g+ O5 I4 u P& V x那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
% k5 x1 F5 A, a世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.' @0 h0 [2 C o* N6 r& o
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.6 w! ^, V; Q5 y! V7 j. J# t E( e
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.2 @* g3 N [& O% h" q6 A2 {* m2 ]
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
9 S/ r% C: g" x) u2 i% ]8 e寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?2 U* i* R' X1 T( o
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.# _1 `' Y. _1 I' H. n. Y4 |! H( Q
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
6 U3 _" J2 m, n% o1 P) N最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
; i( h0 {; C* ]+ f4 V8 |多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?$ c" C6 d% X7 L% K- r4 t7 C
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….: z2 v9 G5 b, w8 R( z1 }
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously* D) J, R" T- N5 I0 {
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.; c6 H: J5 L3 Z: b8 N5 `
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
) w) U2 K" G( f/ p4 w/ G" x为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
. \4 d4 ~* J+ q! X, A多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
3 b4 t# @' D5 U/ e0 r永难平息的泪
% T2 i4 M6 }* k0 \每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes* T$ V. z$ O4 |5 w
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.% `# R7 o' n' N5 L Q
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
9 J; t. t r/ p9 t2 K让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,: e8 @6 r% d; e- O1 x7 Z6 d
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
6 @8 y+ k2 L9 o" t9 Q2 C一抹微笑;# K2 j/ w9 s( E* d" ^5 M/ g! n# c
一个手势;
8 E1 M, A. P5 b5 g$ M一片话语,
2 V+ J2 |! R, k& ~! y2 c. G9 i愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
# _( K% h- C( T! ~/ h4 R. e明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
( U7 {8 t6 @! {心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
8 v- r: X+ s! _这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling& s) j" u% ~/ m/ o* J) n! _4 ?
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..* n9 Q h+ p2 ]- R4 d
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,( i1 |3 ~; x* A, l/ N. U
我并不以为然。2 `+ q' ~* f% N- j& z- |3 r
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed ; i9 [9 }, c- T: b ?5 z7 o
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
' N" a3 W8 x3 j% J6 E/ w4 ?$ Z0 V被一种情绪所左右,3 P3 Y1 Z& c! \7 N6 J" @. b
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .8 @) z. g: x3 W0 n1 a) {( C" D; _' I
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
4 y7 j1 x* x2 t: v8 A. J- l也不问我是否喜欢你,
: d9 D; S; s' {# x' b对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.+ z7 u: H# O' U& t- a Z
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
c5 v" L0 C" e6 C* p3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you2 m: [, I* Y/ ^
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil. I2 V/ G$ ` L& ]5 i! Q" D& S
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
! W( |6 T2 H$ |- t: u0 q( r你的身影已化成一种氛围,
! u' l* X2 C' P记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.. [- O T$ ]2 l$ \8 \! }
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
1 R2 L& `" R9 T随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
! I7 w* d4 c; k5 T# s" l* E3 P6 ~哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
8 J1 g6 k& h( K一种声音,and your voice7 t/ ?5 Y8 [/ Q5 P# ?4 A( b4 H' X
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.: e, ?. c" d8 i& U1 v3 N
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
( T3 {! s5 j: D与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
. J2 J, ~1 _- P5 M2 d+ \象雪花般撒落在我的心田,4 c+ L' S6 o* Q( Z g" L# [# q5 q
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
- y, V, @1 u) s: v6 W0 e" i* e纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。; E5 F* j# K* ?
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss& `( D! w. ~8 n3 ?* @ b- ^$ h# B
有一个能够让思念的人,$ [. e! A2 {- l* ]) T; Y% |, K
其实也是一种幸福。& E( j- x3 L/ l5 U4 v* W
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
: }6 A5 ?3 Y9 _' {& d, B0 W柔柔的海风,$ D. |7 c! y9 g C5 Z) h
甜甜的夏天。% ~' O5 X$ d: j9 O* Z) G
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 9 j+ U$ d: H5 W# @! E
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.- J6 j) J% ~ I8 G5 ^* Q
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.; i# \3 P$ g0 C6 V4 R. p6 V
想和你有共同的情结, }- U! r" z; t
共同的心愿。3 t2 y( E0 g8 j7 E4 c
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you; |. Y, V" J t; d" F# b
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
2 S5 z6 z3 F Q5 e6 z或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film % L7 ^7 g. M$ S& n% F
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
1 _* L# K ~6 ]4 Z# U4 C『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
% }: D" p& _# M8 F# y- p我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, ; i, o' ]' s6 r. }
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”$ n( {0 [0 _; b1 s. U' `; R
或是轻轻的一吻,
9 S7 j5 N8 z- S6 {再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』3 N- t" _, z% Y! L9 _- f4 R3 x& Z6 ~
就足够了. That is enough.
% S* @; k5 j* p这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
+ O- @/ S1 X3 e$ L; @" U- Q' t终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.; d' r, G' H' f! S, W
萌出了芽,
+ Y4 `- m5 R9 X) N& t9 p一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
9 m4 j& F9 }4 e4 h1 B) S% O0 Z浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure., ~- M# V) z V+ L F. ^- b0 h' x# C
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
2 | j& p( S* O! ]6 ^, l) `能够牵著你的手,
3 k- T7 F9 s5 S( b6 U1 U" Y6 l5 T那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
: A# C8 ^5 ^8 ]* v% d1 |让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 3 h# D" ^. ?) p9 w6 g
慢慢地细读, t( ? m/ U5 t# q) g& _# ]/ ]
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
$ ~, h7 g- v$ s在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
' o {, _ ^8 f! _' s( d我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 4 {7 U1 o" C/ v1 I: l$ `1 _& x8 v
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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