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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
- q/ [; b- `1 R, Y: l6 U( E,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
- Q; c! X" P. S& O/ \零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
9 x, d+ Y6 ~, A8 |8 u8 j现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.0 [$ s. i6 T' B& I6 f8 a2 {2 {
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
, l8 O9 ?# M& |$ V7 h$ f! {- y眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.: c1 d: h( M S. ~5 p. t1 N/ Q
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
5 S) ^0 ?2 a7 u, D猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
' b1 N9 {6 x, E S/ H* a; F: V就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.7 D+ @3 R* B }0 a4 A6 ~$ `7 o
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
" C. v, M# `) i- a5 X1 Y那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
$ d: [5 C: I* v3 l1 v世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
, q$ j; v, F5 j1 M" Q x# ?; E昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night./ J1 ~) S0 e/ K2 f- T- z3 d
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.8 M4 v0 p# V7 V4 U+ g) k! v6 r
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. ; b% Z0 p2 A) R
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
: {4 Z: Z- D% c1 ?0 `8 D醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
4 ^5 F3 E2 E- t" Z# \+ q% U迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.% S' b1 {; D5 v( |6 a- J' G
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
6 e9 X( `- q4 X) s. O8 A$ @3 e3 u多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?9 X) w8 k$ h8 v$ W* K8 @+ l
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….( L, K# B' |* j( X
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
8 ^" ^) u; l0 E不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.# k1 n$ b" g J; ^$ I# ^( G8 G
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, & ]) @5 ~' F/ }, Q
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
, j( u' `- {, U4 {" g多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!) Y1 O( X4 W0 p* A @' b* G( q
永难平息的泪 L9 w# _. o$ i( V
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes8 h0 A, ]! S5 I2 R7 N' S% u. C
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.# a$ c# H, r" n( A D* `# D4 d
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
2 H. ~3 y; {/ t让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
- w7 x. f; y* y5 r. \你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
& d' Y* j6 j; P" _9 B5 W! m$ h一抹微笑;3 Z, W. z; p5 [8 X6 o/ l
一个手势;
1 [+ h$ @- L' E- h" p/ Q/ v+ M( Q一片话语,
3 K8 @& i2 M: P( E2 B: n Y6 J愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
, ?! ?: z5 q6 v$ {$ x明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner" R5 \8 ^ h, y/ `) t; S
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
4 j8 y: v6 `' q# F) O& T这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling5 Z0 }; u7 P4 T' L* a
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
1 V- ~; M& B. h5 z4 g o' ^$ L; ^起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
! _0 C" `5 Q$ P- k0 I3 e/ ]) P我并不以为然。' A( [! b0 ^$ `) o8 H
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
/ T1 K/ M7 v3 K; u% `1 b, q慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .# P3 ]9 a8 p z( f
被一种情绪所左右,
1 I3 ^, e, y. D$ I+ `总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
; [# w1 j+ Q, n! F- U2 A2 i即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you9 k6 u0 Q" m* S, F8 z
也不问我是否喜欢你,
/ e! x, ]. h' r% [1 r; f" s- v对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
* q2 W. j8 V8 I, [0 \" @! \4 z只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
) T; @1 f A( F& S3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
0 W: @& e' S* v8 i1 b5 u心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
% i! |/ ?* u- P$ M7 [然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere : N5 T5 A8 a r! D. Z$ v( Z
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
& P n; ~& j, [( v- ]" D& [记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
+ v I; ?. m5 j6 o- e+ J- O' ]你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
0 {! h) c% s# }- K! v2 q2 P随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
4 ?' ^# {, }% M7 s* ^哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
4 |- k! ~4 s# Z+ U' [" M/ M一种声音,and your voice: M' _% o# Y, P
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
& i- C9 I: |8 }0 V掺杂著幸福的感觉。( C* A) ~9 f: U6 w. m' w2 w3 p
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land2 U, g6 G* u5 y r: y
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,7 S2 }- ?+ ~* j# a+ Y H* ?
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.9 W& P1 }% e B* l* y, ^
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。, C9 L s! [9 W5 k+ G5 |# {
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss/ H: ]! j$ R$ |7 i, i% ^/ c* u3 q
有一个能够让思念的人,9 W; y1 _1 \5 P( m
其实也是一种幸福。/ N5 f7 d) b( Z, \+ |# _- g. L1 i
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
3 M8 @0 f9 i7 V0 ^柔柔的海风,/ M( x' \# D X: ^# y7 ~; I
甜甜的夏天。
2 |+ j2 E8 S b& K/ L一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
6 z n+ n8 y0 ~1 ^5 @$ c' L只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly./ q3 V6 m% i$ s- {! Y2 f! @
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.0 D. X2 K, F5 g. W- K& _
想和你有共同的情结,0 z2 h4 u3 n+ {0 j
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
2 j) F1 p9 C9 t( e; d6 f一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together7 }8 W5 A4 N5 c5 @
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 1 m- e! ^ v% q7 b) R
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.# \! ]$ g5 } `1 q
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?1 A3 e( ^3 M1 r2 \
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, + _3 ]; |' T. W/ c( ~3 @0 ^
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
) A$ ^/ T5 e9 a或是轻轻的一吻," v5 p5 ~/ }: ]: r1 n3 }
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』! h7 }- Y3 h, v# H: i; _
就足够了. That is enough.7 W$ U3 M3 L- k8 y
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
; S1 E9 B* P& G5 D/ Y X( V7 y终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
; {- R$ N) {" d+ a: ^萌出了芽,
5 ~- K/ j8 T) n0 X3 s, B; G! J一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
5 J6 N+ I/ \2 z* `浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
/ n7 l5 r* p( a$ @如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
2 ?( N* R9 r; [% f% h能够牵著你的手,& G9 w& x! |2 j! n8 K9 I
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.& {' E- d1 E8 t' {/ ` X. z
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
, h( t: m* E0 R) p! }3 f( p1 w慢慢地细读,$ c+ U9 W; L! R
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
L; t$ ?" [9 K! a. u. I* {在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me 8 y. o# C- B/ J7 X& f
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor ! e/ ^0 l" ]* M' I
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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