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发表于 2005-3-30 20:53 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
西西今天看图写了个小故事. 我鼓励她后, 她要求我贴在网上给小辣椒小气球LOVELYKID等小朋友们看故事.5 ^8 a' j9 @5 p5 \

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+ X/ H( |2 E" j4 J* iOne day four children were bored. Then their parents asked if they would like to go skating. Then the children got excited and said that they would like to go. They all went to the lake. They enjoyed skating. Then one of the boys step on a piece of thin ice. Then  He felll into a hole on the ice. All the children heard him calling for help . All the children called for help. Some adults heard the children called for help. Then the adults who heard the children came running toward the lake. Then one of the adults pulled the boy out of the lake and the children lived happily ever after.
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发表于 2005-3-30 21:45 | 显示全部楼层
great
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发表于 2005-3-31 08:29 | 显示全部楼层

好!

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发表于 2005-3-31 11:00 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
好!
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发表于 2005-4-9 11:38 | 显示全部楼层
还行
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发表于 2005-4-25 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
不错
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发表于 2005-4-28 12:06 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
hao!   JIa jing!
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发表于 2005-4-28 13:31 | 显示全部楼层

非常好的!

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发表于 2005-5-2 18:37 | 显示全部楼层
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老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
好!
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发表于 2005-5-15 12:49 | 显示全部楼层
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